Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Unknown Soldier – Mirror War – MK Stangeland Jr.


The UNKNOWN SOLDIER is battling a man dressed just like him, bandages and all – the UNKNOWN IMPOSTER. For simplicities sake, the two will simply be referred to as ‘SOLDIER’ and ‘IMPOSTER’ during this script.

(8 Panels)

Panel 1: Setting: An industrial park. SOLDIER and IMPOSTER run in opposite directions as they simultaneously shoot at each other and try to move to cover as the back-side of an explosion continues to erupt in the background.

SFX: Bam bam bam bam bam!

SFX: toom-toom-toom-toom-toom!

RADIO VOICE: Lost targets, lost target. I repeat, lost targets.

Panel 2: A command center. AMANDA WALLER is edging a operator slightly to the side as she tries to speak directly to the other people at the industrial sight alongside SOLDIER.

WALLER: Get them back! I do not want us loosing track of the real one!

Panel 3: A video/computer screen image shows SOLDIER hiding behind a stack of crates. He’s fiddling with a small electronic device.

RADIO VOICE: We have visual on the Soldier.

Panel 4: Close-up on the face of AMANDA WALLER as she ponders out-loud.

AMANDA WALLER: What is he…

Panel 5: The screen from panel 3 goes to static.

RADIO VOICE: Scratch that, we’ve lost all video feed.

Panel 6: WALLER slams her fist down on a control panel in anger.

AMANDA WALLER: [Word Blacked Out]!!!

Panel 7: As people rush about trying to fix the problem one operator turns to look at WALLER.

OPERATOR: What’s he doing!?

WALLER: He’s making this fight personal.

Panel 8: Close-up on AMANDA WALLER’s glaring eyes.

WALLER: He wants to settle this fight between just the two of them.

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3 comments:

  1. Great visuals, some cool story telling devices with the live feed on the screens giving us to sets of character at once and you end on a nice hook for a page turn or end of issue.

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  2. A solid action packed page with some great moments.

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  3. Oh, man...shades of Huxley, and you absolutely nail the Soldier's M.O. Also, thanx for bringing in "the Wall"...that may have to be another week's character....

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