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Panel 1 takes up most of the page. Panels 2 and 3 are split equally along the bottom.
1 - An astronaut stands on the moon looking towards the Earth, his back to the reader. This panel should be majestic as all get out.
CAPTION (UNKNOWN SOLDIER): It's gorgeous.
2 - Switch to a shot of the astronaut's helmet. Through the visor, you can see it's the Unknown Soldier. He wears a tired look on his face.
CAPTION (UNKNOWN SOLDIER): Too bad they didn't send me here to take in the sights.
3 - While the previous panel focused on the Unknown Soldier's face, this one is looking towards his chest / upper-body. He has a space gun hanging in front of him from some straps around his neck. He's moved his hands to grip it.
CAPTION (UNKNOWN SOLDIER): Better get to work.
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This would make a great page visually, but also a great hook storywise.
ReplyDeleteConsider me hooked for this story. Amazing visuals and each panel just adds so many layers to your story. I want to know more, and thats what any good writer should be getting their audience to want. :)
ReplyDeleteSome crazy visuals going on here and something I hadn't thought of-- the character in an entirely new sphere of battle.
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