Saturday, October 25, 2014

Frog-Man - The Madding Crowd, Part 9 - R.A. Wonsowski

Layout: best way to think about this is as a page out of one of those newspaper comics anthologies, three 4-panel strips one on top of the other, like so:
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Panel 1- Night. Foreground, the CREEPER (with Jack Ryder's mind still inside) is on a rooftop, elbows rested on the ledge, and peering through binoculars in our direction. Background, a frog-like shape bounds from one building back toward the building the CREEPER's on.

NO COPY

Panel 2- Same as Panel 1, but FROG-MAN has landed on our building.

NO COPY

Panel 3- FROG-MAN has walked up and is standing next to CREEPER, who is still staring intently through his binocs. They're both looking towards us.

FROG-MAN: Hey.
CREEPER: Hey.

Panel 4- Same as Panel 3, except CREEPER has lowered his binocs and turned to address FROG-MAN.

FROG-MAN: Whatcha doing?
CREEPER: Well, I...

Panel 5- same as Panel 4.

NO COPY

Panel 6- same as above, but CREEPER looks at us in a very Ferris Bueller-like deadpan fashion.

NO COPY

Panel 7- Same as panel 4.

CREEPER: I'm trying to find a way into those labs.
FROG-MAN: What's in there?

Panel 8- CREEPER has put the binoculars back up and is looking back in our direction. FROG-MAN has crossed his arms.

CREEPER: My other half. The crazy half.
FROG-MAN: You mean you with the candy-apple red back hair is normal?
CREEPER: Says the GEICO gecko's thyroidally challenged cousin.

Panel 9- FROG-MAN gestures nonchalantly as if he was going to make a casual point. CREEPER yells at him, a little scared but more insulted, as he points towards us.

FROG-MAN: Y'know, fifteen minutes could save you--
CREEPER: And second of all, shush! There's people in there looking for me.
FROG-MAN: Really?
CREEPER: Yes!

Panel 10- FROG-MAN cups his chin thoughtfully as he cogitates. CREEPER continues to yell at him angrily.

FROG-MAN: And you're trying to find a way in?
CREEPER: Yes!!
FROG-MAN: Besides, say, their front door?
CREEPER: YE...!

Panel 11- FROG-MAN crosses his arms again, regarding CREEPER thoughtfully. CREEPER is caught short mid-rant, a look of "waitaminnit" on his face as he is confused by his own comic book logic.

NO COPY

Panel 12- CREEPER walks away off-panel, fuming, tossing his binoculars over the side of the building. FROG-MAN gestures apologetically with open arms, shoulders shrugged.

FROG-MAN: Just saying...
CREEPER: Isn't there a Cajun chef with a deep fryer looking for you?

...to be continued...(promise, fight scenes coming soon)

Friday, October 24, 2014

Frog-Man – Backup – Travis M. Holyfield


Panel 1: The villainous ANI-MEN stand in front of a bank that they have just robbed. Smoke pours from the broken windows, and the street around them displays the destruction they have wrought. From left to right they stand – BIRD-MAN, CAT-MAN, FROG-MAN, and APE-MAN. They are facing directly towards us, reacting to something off-panel.  

BIRD-MAN: AGAIN with this loser? This is the third time this week!

CAT-MAN: He must like the feeling of his face hitting the street.

FROG-MAN: I’m going to rip that mask right off his head and cram it down his throat.

APE-MAN: Whoa! Hold on a minute, fellas! He’s got backup!

 
Panel 2: A perfect mirror of the previous panel, and now we can see what the villains were reacting to. Lined up to face them, and in the same poses as their criminal counterparts, are NIGHTHAWK, HELLCAT, THE FABULOUS FROG-MAN, and GORILLA MAN.

NIGHTHAWK: Let’s get ‘em, Defenders!

HELLCAT: No. No no no. I am NOT joining the Defenders again.

FABULOUS FROG-MAN: Your time of comeuppance is at hand, evildoers! I have assembled the perfect team to counter your villainy!

FABULOUS FROG-MAN: BEHOLD! THE AVENGING ANI-MEN!

FABULOUS FROG-MAN: (Ehr. And Ani-Lady.)

GORILLA MAN: Kid, how did you even get my number?

Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Frog-Man – The Dark Frog Strikes – MK Stangeland Jr.

(5 Panels)

(Note: All panels except PANEL 5 should be done in Black and White in a style that mirrors what’s associated with FRANK MILLER.)

Panel 1: The swamp – FROG-MAN’s eyes can be seen poking out of the water and looking at the reader, hidden amongst the plentiful plant life around him.

TEXT BOX: The Frog – the underestimate hunter of the animal kingdom.

Panel 2: View to show what FROG-MAN is looking at – it’s a couple of generic criminal thugs with automatic rifles.

TEXT BOX: Possessing tongues with unnatural reach.

Panel 3: Close up on one of the criminals as a large frog’s tongue wraps around his neck – the gruesome nature of him suddenly being choked should be played up for a parody effect.

TEXT BOX: And uncanny aim.

Panel 4: The crook with the tongue around his throat is yanked backwards as he’s being pulled through the air towards the water. The other thug is looking on in horrified surprise at what’s happening.

SFX: crack!

TEXT BOX: And once caught, death is inevitable.

Panel 5: EUGENE PATILIO (FROG-MAN), but with the head part of his costume off – is sitting and reading a comic that looks like a grimdark style FROG-MAN comic. He looks aghast at what he’s reading.

Standing over his shoulder is DEMOLITION MAN (DENNIS DUNPHY).

DEMOLITION MAN (1): Hey, they gave you your own comic?

DEMOLITION MAN (2): Can I see it?

FROG-MAN: I really don’t think you want to.


(END)

Monday, October 20, 2014

Frog-Man - Fitting in - Ben Rosenthal



1.  From behind Ollie Osnick as he sits in the vastness of the Negative zone, staring out into space.  His arm is missing, so this is modern day Ollie after the fight with Venom and the fall of Prison 42.

VOICE (off panel)
Do you ever think you will get home?


2.  From front on.  A pair of legs either side of him.

VOICE (from the pair of legs on Ollie's left)
You have family that wonders if you are alive or dead.
Friends as well.

OLLIE
I ran away years ago. They would have found me by now if they cared.
I would have returned if I did.


3.  A the two men who were standing next to Ollie are now sitting next to him.  To the left (the one who was speaking off panel) is Frog-Man with Toad on his right.  They are dressed as when they were all members of The Initiative.

FROG-MAN
This is the arm thing, isn't it?
I think you're just afraid of how people will look at you.  That you won't fit in.


4.  A close up on Frog-Man.

FROG-MANOne arm or five--


5.  A wide panel, front on showing Ollie sitting by himself.  He is thinking - a small spark of positivity as lit.

CAPTION (FROG-MAN)
--you always were a Misfit.


Sunday, October 19, 2014

Frog-Man - Hopalong - Grant McLaughlin

1 - Frog-Man skitters across the ground, bouncing a couple times as he slams into a wall.  His costume is burned, charred, and generally messed up to show how much he's gone through already.

VILLAIN (off-panel): Stay down.

SFX: SLAM!

2 - Shot from Frog-Man's prone form looking up towards the oncoming villain: Electro!

ELECTRO: I've already taken out Spider-Man and Daredevil.  What chance could you possibly hope to have?

3 - Focus on Frog-Man as he tries to get up.  He's down on his face and trying to push himself up with his arms.  Again, he and his costume are in a bad way.

FROG-MAN (1): You're right.

FROG-MAN (2): I'm not half the hero they are.

4 - Frog-Man has made it up to his knees.  Even the effort to do that looks like it's taken a lot out of him.

FROG-MAN: But I am the Fabulous Frog-Man.

5 - Frog-Man is up to a pseudo-crouching position.  Electro is approaching, striding confidently towards the downed hero - perhaps charging up some electricity to attack with.

FROG-MAN: And as long as I live and breath.

5 - Frog-Man turns his position into an attack, leaping towards Electro in an attempt to use his own body as a battering ram.  While somewhat surprised, Electro looks ready to meet him.

CAPTION (FROG-MAN): I'll keep trying.

Why Frog-Man?

When it comes to what I think of as some of the best comic book characters, the heroes and villains that I'm routinely most excited about reading, I rarely turn to the best and brightest.  No, I am far more drawn to the mediocre and the middling.  They aren't the greatest, strongest, smartest, or any of those -est words you'll think of, but they are perhaps some of the most dedicated.

Their time will never truly arrive.  They'll never make it to the top of the totem pole.  They're doomed to spend the rest of their existence playing second fiddle (if they're lucky) to those around them.  Some of them know this in the core of their beings.  Others have no idea and never will.  But in each and every case, they go out there and give it their all anyways.


I first came across Eugene Patillo, the Fabulous Frog-Man, in the Spider Island: Avengers one-shot and loved the ridiculous and hilarious portrayal that Christopher Yost gave the character.  He was hapless, kind of pathetic, and strangely charming.  Despite being a perennial loser, he had an upbeat outlook on life, believing that everything would work itself out in the end.

Beyond the great amount of humour associated with him, Frog-Man is a prime example of the phenomenon I describe above.  The son of failed, small-time villain Leap-Frog, Eugene decided to "borrow" his father's suit to make up for all the misdeeds of his parent by becoming a superhero.  He has one of the most ridiculous names, the gaudiest costumes, and the least respect of any hero you can think of (that is, if anyone bothers thinking about him at all), but none of that matters, because Eugene's going to go out and be the best hero he can be.

Day in and day out, he will be there, doing his best.  His name isn't going to make the papers.  He isn't going to be trending on social media.  But that isn't why he does it.

He does it because that's who he is.


Frog-Man's never gotten a moment in the limelight.  To be perfectly honest, he probably never will.  All of his stories involve him achieving victory through dumb luck at best or thoroughly embarrassing himself at worst.  And yet, he never gives up.  He always puts that suit back on.  He always goes out to do his part to make the world a better place.  It may not be the biggest contribution, but it's his.

And no one can ever take that away from him.

Frog-Man is a joke to many, but his commitment to his hopes and dreams are laudable as hell.  He's never going to give up and never going to say die.  If that's not something we should all be trying to live up to, I don't know what is.

Plus, there was that one time where he defeated Flag-Smasher by throwing up on him.  That was hilarious.



Saturday, October 18, 2014

Norman Osborn – Final Interview– Travis M. Holyfield


Panel 1: NORMAN OSBORN sits behind a magnificent desk in his lavish office. Our POV for the entire page is that of the young man sitting across from him. Norman is perusing a piece of paper – the young man’s C.V.

NORMAN: Undergrad at Wharton. MBA from Harvard. Letters of recommendation from several of your professors. Internships with Houlihan Lokey and PwC.

NORMAN: Very impressive, Peter.

Panel 2: Norman continues to read the resume.

PETE (OFF-PANEL): Thank you so much, sir. It’s always been my dream to work for Osborn. I think I can bring a lot to the company.

PETE (OFF-PANEL): Oh, and you can call me Pete. That’s what I go by.

Panel 3: Norman has looked up from his reading and is staring at the young man. There is a faint touch of a smile now on his lips. The resume is starting to crumble in his hand, which is clenching.

NORMAN: Pete. Pete. Pete.

NORMAN: Petey. Pete. Peter.

NORMAN: Heh.   

Panel 4:  Norman puts the resume on his desk and reaches into a desk drawer with his other hand. His face has resumed its mask of normalcy and sanity.

NORMAN: I agree, Pete. I think there IS a great deal you can offer us.   

NORMAN: There’s just one more thing I need you to do for me.

Panel 5:  Norman reaches across the desk, offering the young man a cardboard box.

NORMAN: Could I trouble you to try this on for me?

PETE (OFF-PANEL): Uhm… Of course sir. May I ask why?

Panel 6:  From our POV as the young man, we look into the box, which contains a cheap Spider-Man Halloween costume.  
NORMAN (OFF-PANEL): So I can murder you and then throw someone you love off a bridge. Standard practice, really.  
 

Norman Osborn - The Madding Crowd, Part 8 - R.A.Wonsowski

See last week's post for the full skinny...

Panel 1 - Another early Ditko vibe...NORMAN OSBORNE, black suit with green turtleneck, foreground, is looking out his conference room window. DR. SKOLOS, cheap suit and white lab coat, background, sits at the long mahogany table for his midnight meeting, papers and blueprints scattered all over it, and he's losing patience, but trying not to show. NORMAN's face is obscured by his hands as he looks outside pressed up against the window.

SKOLOS: ...mind telling us what's so interesting out the window?
OSBORNE: There's a yellow man with binoculars scoping out your pharma labs down the way...
OSBORNE: (small print) ...could be one of the spider's amazing friends...
SKOLOS: No matter. If we could get back to the offer on the table...

Panel 2 - OSBORNE turns to the conference table, foreground. We can now see a blueprint of what looks to be some kind of scienc-y laser cannon with a seat and console attatched behind it. OSBORNE's head should not be visible, in fact the panel frame top should cut him at the shoulders.

OSBORNE: Ah, yes. Your pet project. Quite morbid, studying death.
OSBORNE: Why you need black-ledger experimental weaponry for your research is beyond me.

Panel 3 - SKOLOS leans back in his chair as he tosses a letter-sized manila envelope on the table, toothlessly smiling as he twirls his pointed goatee.

SKOLOS: Let's just say that the work is at a critical...phase.
SKOLOS: Is the deal not fair?
OSBORNE (off panel): Oh, no. It's more than equitable.

Panel 4 - OSBORNE has picked up the envelope, open at the end. We can only see his arms and hands above the table. One hand has tipped the open envelope, and something shiny and black, the size of a deck of cards, slides out and into his other hand.

OSBORNE: And you can stop psychoanalyzing me. I knew if I'd take your...deal...in the first fifteen seconds of our meeting.
SKOLOS (off panel): Then, why? If it's all so facile for you, why deal at all?
OSBORNE: Well...

Panel 5 - Close-up: NORMAN OSBORNE holds a large black diamond sliver, about four inches long, to his face. His right (our left) 2/3 of his face are in a Green Goblin-ish expression, but the skin is blackened. The normal third is dead serious.

OSBORNE: ...it appeals to my...baser angels...

...Next episode: the Creeper returns!

Wednesday, October 15, 2014

Norman Osborn – Marvel Babies: The Cranky Cabal – MK Stangeland Jr.


(6 Panels)

Panel 1: MARVEL BABY versions of NORMAN OSBORN (in IRON PATRIOT armor), DR. DOOM, TASKMASTER, RED HOOD, and LOKI.

The five of them are meeting inside a treehouse. OSBORN, TASKMASTER, RED HOOD, and LOKI are standing around a small, wooden table. DR. DOOM stands apart from the rest of them group.

DR. DOOM: DOOM demands to know why you kicked out Namor and Emma!

OSBORN: Because Namor and Emma are both stupid tattletales!

Panel 2: DR. DOOM stands angrily on his side of the treehouse, pointing at Taskmaster as he stomps his foot.

DR. DOOM (1): And you replaced them with him?

DR. DOOM (2): I demand you let them back!

Panel 3: NORMAN OSBORN slams his fist on the table.

OSBORN (1): No! This is my club, my treehouse, and my rules!

OSBORN (2): And my rules say no tattletales!

Panel 4: DR. DOOM starts to float in the air, arms crossed in front of him.

DR. DOOM (1): Fine, be a stupid head!

DR. DOOM (2): DOOM will start his own secret treehouse club! And it’ll be way better than your stupid secret treehouse club!

Panel 5: NORMAN OSBORN looks like he’s about to throw a temper tantrum. DR. DOOM points at TASKMASTER.

OSBORN: Nuh-UH! You can’t do that, you stupid copycat!

DR. DOOM: Oh yeah? Big talk, coming from the stupid head that recruited someone who’s nothing but a copycat!

Panel 6: TASKMASTER looks offended and upset as DR. DOOM sticks his tongue out at him through his mask.

TASKMASTER: What did you call me?

DR. DOOM: DOOM called you a copycat, you stupid copycat!


(END PAGE)

Monday, October 13, 2014

Norman Osborn - Out to Brunch - Grant McLaughlin

Three rows of panels.  Row one is made up of a single panel, row two is panels 2 through 4 (panel 2 is thin, while panels 3 and 4 are of equal size), and row three is a single panel as well.  Row two should be the main focus of the page.

1 - A large, heartless room.  It is the Osborn dining room.  Norman and a young (maybe 10 or so) Harry sit at opposite ends of a long table, separated by its size.  Harry should be on the left side of the panel, Norman on the right.  The table is covered with various lunch foods - sandwiches, cold cuts, cookies, and so forth.  Harry asks a questions curiously, while Norman pensively puts down his cutlery, considering the inquiry.  If possible, have a clock showing a mid-morning time (maybe 10:30 or 11).  Also, having the perspective being somewhat pulled back to make the table look a little small within the size of the panel / room (instead of filling it out) wouldn't be the worst thing.

HARRY: Daddy, why don't we ever have brunch?

NORMAN: ...

2 - Switch scenes to Norman leading Harry down a winding, medieval-castle-esque stairwell.  He can be holding a torch / there can be sconces on the wall and everything.  Norman is determined; Harry is nervous.

CAPTION (NORMAN): Come with me.

3 - At their destination, we find a panel of Harry and Norman looking upon a strange altar filled with various damaged and destroyed waffle paraphernalia (mostly broken waffle makers of various ages and eras, along with things like mixing bowls, measuring cups, and the like).  It should look nefarious and strange in the dim lighting.

HARRY (quietly): What is this place?

NORMAN (1): A shrine.  A dark altar dedicated to our oldest enemy.

NORMAN (2): Brunch's cruel overlord.

HARRY (quietly): I-I don't understand.

4 - Norman holds one of the broken waffle irons in one hand and points at his signature haircut with the other.  His face is a horrible rictus grin of madness, made all the more awful by the poor lighting of the strange chamber.  His word balloon should be large and wild to parallel his attitude.  The caption box should be tucked into the bottom right corner of the page.

NORMAN: Don't you see?  How else could we have gotten this ludicrous haircut?!

CAPTION (generic): ...what?

5 - Switch scene.  Various Avengers, including Hawkeye, Spider-Man, Luke Cage, Tony Stark, and really anyone you think would be appropriate sit at a table, mirroring Norman and Harry's position from the first panel.  They can either be at the Avengers Mansion being served by Jarvis, at a public restaurant, or whatever.  The important thing is that they are eating brunch (you could even try to slip another clock into the background to show that).  Hawkeye has a look of surprise on his face, while all his colleagues look super unimpressed - feel free to throw in some facepalming, head shaking, glares, and so forth.  Hawkeye should also have a stack of waffles on the end of his fork, ready to eat them.

HAWKEYE: You guys have a better explanation?