Monday, July 21, 2014
1 - Low shot. Melati Kusuma sitting glumly in her wheelchair is the focus of this panel, but the foreground is filled with the legs of people walking by in front of her in either direction. She is stationary, looking longingly towards these limbs, which (if possible) look kind of like bars of a jail around her.
CAPTION (MELATI): I still miss it sometimes.
2 - Move closer to Melati. She rubs her legs absentmindedly as she continues to look off into the distance with a frown on her face. From the background, it's evident that she is in a park of some description.
CAPTION (MELATI): It can be tempting to think that, having lost them a second time, my life is over.
CAPTION (MELATI): That nothing I do will ever make me feel better.
3 - Someone off-panel calls to Melati, causing her to look (with some surprise) over her shoulder towards the source of the sound.
VOICE (off-panel): Melati!
CAPTION (MELATI): But life is about choices.
4 - Switch angles to an over the shoulder view of Melati. She looks with an evident smile upon a group of women who are ready and waiting to play some wheelchair basketball.
CAPTION (MELATI): And I think it's about time to choose to be happy.
WOMAN: ...are we doing this or what?
MELATI: You better believe it!
1. Komodo is sitting in a room. We see her full body, facing head on to the panel.
I look like a monster. Something from a helpless child's nightmare.
2. Exactly the same framing as the previous panel, but Komodo is now in human form. We can see her legs are not there.
Or, I am the helpless child.
3. A head shot. Komodo is back in her lizard form.
Like this, I only appear as a monster.
5. The largest panel of the page. Komodo is back in her lizard form, stading up and walking out the room - we can see what it is now. A visiting room in a high security prison. She was visiting someone. That someone is Hardball.
You're are one.
6. A smaller panel of Hardball, similar to the first panel. He is silent. He is pensive.
Sunday, July 20, 2014
Saturday, July 19, 2014
Friday, July 18, 2014
Panel 1- Standing under a streetlight, trying to look inconspicuous in trench coats, cheap suits, and sunglasses are HOGUN, VOLSTAGG, and FANDRAL (HOGUN and VOLSTAGG are still wearing their headgear). JÀNE FOSTER has walked past them, has jolted herself to a stop midstride.
Panel 2- JANE has turned, scratching her head, talking the three, who are trying to act nonchalant.
JANE: Volstagg, what are you guys doing?
VOLSTAGG: SHH! We are, as you say, under the covers. Out on a stake.
Panel 3- JANE facepalms as VOLSTAGG pulls a pair of opera glasses from his coat pocket. FANDRALL turns to her to explain as HOGUN looks off-panel.
JANE: Oh for the love of...
FANDRALL: Loki told us of a great beast that escaped his dungeon. He called it a "snipe", a giant fanged cow that breathes blue fire and glows purple when spooked...
Panel 4- HOGUN points off panel, VOLSTAGG looks in the same direction through the tiny glasses. JANE is exasperated as FANDRALL continues.
FANDRALL: It must be found before Odin, Father of All, discovers its absence...
JANE: Guys! The god of mischief sent you on a snipe hunt! There's no such thing as a...
Panel 5- All four step back as the SNIPE, exactly as FANDRALL described, charges across panel. Recently torn off flashing police car lights are impaled on its horns.
Panel 6- VOLSTAGG grins, seething with excitement as FANDRALL draws his sword to go after the snipe. HOGUN follows grimly as JANE puts her head down and walks off on the opposite direction.
VOLSTAGG: The hunt is on!
JANE: I'm going home...
HOGUN: Loki has much to answer for...
SNIPE (Off-Panel): MOOOO!!
Panel 1: The Warriors 3 are getting out of a rather small car, a VW Beetle or something, small enough that Volstagg is straining to pop himself out of the driver's seat area, in a parking lot.
Caption: EASTON, PA
Fandral: WHEN YOU PROPOSED A ROAD TRIP, I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN TO ASK WHERE TO.
Hogun: THIS HAD BETTER BE WORTH IT, VOLSTAGG.
Volstagg: OH, BUT IT IS, MY FELLOW FIGHTERS! FOR TODAY, WE PARTAKE IN THE GREATEST PASTIME A WARRIOR MAY HAVE!
Panel 2: Volstagg is bursting through the doors of the Easton Funplex with a massive wad of cash in one hand, and a Chikara staffer seated at a folding table is startled.
Volstagg: ENTRANCE KEEPER, HOW MUCH FOR 3 OF YOUR FINEST FRONT ROW SEATS?
Staffer: YOU-YOU'RE JUST IN LUCK, SIR. WE'VE GOT JUST 3 LEFT!
Panel 3: Volstagg, Hogun, and Fandral are sitting in their front row seats. Volstagg's folding chair is obviously straining to support him, and he is loaded down with a bevy of snacks. In the ring, we can see The Faces Of Pain(The Barbarian, Meng and The Warlord) and Team ROH(Nick Jackson, Matt Jackson, and Mike Bennett) facing off for their first round match. Hogun is clearly disinterested in the action, while Fandral is eyeing Maria, Mike Bennett's valet.
Hogun: FRANKLY, VOLSTAGG, I DON'T KNOW HOW YOU THOUGHT WE-
Panel 4: In the ring, Nick and Matt Jackson simultaneously superkick The Warlord, and we can see Hogun react in astonishment in the crowd.
Panel 5: Hogun is standing up, in a rage, as Fandral continues eyeing Maria. Volstagg is startled, but continues eating.
Hogun: THAT IS NOT HOW WARRIORS CONDUCT THEMSELVES! BOOOOOO! BOOOOOO! HISS AND BOOOOOO, GOOD SIR!
Fandral: IS THAT AN ILLEGAL FOREIGN OBJECT IN YOUR PANTS, FINE MAIDEN, OR ARE YOU SIMPLY THAT ENJOYED TO SEE MY BEAUTIFUL VISAGE?
(P.S. sorry this one went up a little late, I've been kind of busy as of late)
Wednesday, July 16, 2014
Monday, July 14, 2014
1. Close up of Fandral, torso up. He is looking down to something that is in front of him (off panel). . What we can see of the background behind him is dark. He looks confused.
Well, this is a unique situation.
2. Close up of Hogun, same framing as Fandral in the previous panel, and is also looking down at the off panel object. His grim, stone-faced expression reveals nothing other than he is not happy about this situation.
It is a trap. Dispose of it.
3. Once again, same framing on a close up of Volstaag also looking at the object below off panel. He is happy with the object.
Nonsense. He may be a lot of things--
4. High shot of looking down at the Warrior's Three. They are looking at a small baby Loki in the middle of them.
But he has never been so cute!
Yeah - Warriors Three and a Baby.
I would write the hell out of this.
Sunday, July 13, 2014
Thor has been tricked by Hela, queen of the underworld, and has now become her eternal prisoner. The Warriors Three journey to Hel to free him.
Panel 1: Wide shot. The Warriors Three stand in the barren wasteland that is Hel, before Hela sat on her throne, above them. Their weapons are drawn.
HELA: What's this? You come to my kingdom of the dead to parlay with me for Thor's freedom?
Panel 2: Group shot of the threesome. Fandral stands in the middle, holding his sword low, a smug grin on his face. Volstagg and Hogun brandish their weapons closely, serious expressions.
FANDRAL: Nay, Queen Hela. We come to correct an injustice.
VOLSTAGG: Aye! And we shall do so by tongue or by steel. Your choice, witch.
FANDRAL: I assure you, I am talented with both.
Panel 3: Wide shot again. Hela raises her hand, and zombie-like creatures are rising from the dirt. The Warriors stand tightly together, facing out, on guard with their weapons.
HELA: You think you three have the might to defeat my legions of the dead? Three of you, against every soul that has ever lived?
Panel 4: Close on the trio. Hogun faces Hela now, but Fandral and Volstagg look over their shoulders at her. All have determination in their eyes.
HOGUN: For our brother-in-arms, we shall fight til our last breaths. And then, when time and age claim us and send us to your damned dominion, we shall take up the fight again, until Ragnarock itself. But we shall not leave here without Thor.
HOGUN: Know this, or, by all means, test it.
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